Friday, March 9, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #29


Welcome to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. A picture might be worth a thousand words, but today it’s worth 100 no more, no less. Thanks for stopping by and please follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday. Now here are my 100.

He could still feel his hands on his body. Nathan sighed as he watched Neil exit his building. Neil took the time to smile up at Nathan as he got in his car.

Damn, he hated watching him leave. He wanted more. More touching, more kissing, more sex. He could still taste his sweet cum on his tongue. Still feel the velvety softness of his steel hard cock in his mouth.
“Mmm, dammit Neil, why did you have to answer the damn phone? You knew it was her.” He couldn’t stand Neil’s wife. She always interrupted their time together. Always.

15 comments:

  1. Damn the bitch!! Yummmmmmmm-O, I could taste and still feel him, too. Come back................:) xo

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  2. Very nice, Bonni. He could still taste him as he got into the car. Great touch.

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  4. Damn her! A hot scene could have been made sizzling if he could have stopped. When is Neil paying another call. Great flasher

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  5. Poor Nathan! It never feels good to be second choice. Make a choice Neil!!! Great FFF

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  6. Awww, poor guy. He needs to just go to Neil's house and say what's up. lol Good job!

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  7. I'm afraid that I could only think of one word instead 100 and that word is "yummy".

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  8. very emotional post Bonni. Well written. I do feel bad for him though.

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  9. How sad that he's cheating on his wife. Great flash.

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  10. Another fabulous FFF! I'm so not surprised. Love how many emotions I felt reading this from the sweet smile you invoked when he watched his lover from the window to the sadness at the overall situation. You rock lady. Great job.

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  11. Wow That's some fantastic description! Great Flash.

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  12. Yeah- shut the phone off! Great post!

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  13. Ooo, secret lovers. So scandalous. Very sexy post Bonni. You never disappoint. ;o)

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  14. Awesome FFF. I can feel his despiration to be with his lover. A shame that their love has to be hidden from the world.

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