Sunday, July 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #2

This is a solo vibe scene with Laine from Eternal Bliss. Keep an eye out for more snippets. I"ll be posting more on my blog and my website. http://www.wix.com/morbonni/bonnisansom



“No, dammit, this isn’t happening. The intense buzz of her vibrator had diminished to a slow click, click, click, and then nothing. Laine threw herself back on her pillow. The ceiling fan cooled the fine sheen of sweat covering her body. Just hours earlier she’d met the man who’d inspired this attempted orgasm. Pete, the ass.

15 comments:

  1. Awe, hell. Hope the girl has a backup!

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  2. Been there, done that. LOL Great six

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  3. Tragedy sheer tragedy. Fantastic six. Thank you.

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  4. Pete, the ass!!! Funny! Great six!

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  5. Hope she has fresh batteries :-)

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  6. Oooh...frustration!! Great six!

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  7. Loved everything about this snippet. Terrific tension ... that an asshole inspired her frustrated attempt at release. Liked the ceiling fan cooling her skin, the click, click of the vibrator dying. Everything about the snippest was great. You hooked me.

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  8. Sexy scene! I hope she find some relief soon!!

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  9. Thats horrible! I hope she had an extra one! And now I want to meet that inspiration of hers!

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  10. Oh no - you could feel the frustration. Hope she gets the real thing, even if he is an ass!

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  11. Ass or not she'd better go find Pete

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  12. Very funny, and frustrating! Great six.

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  13. Funny and frustrating at the same time. Great description. Now I'm really curious about "Pete, the ass."

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  14. Oh no, that sucks! Hope she gets to finish off! :)

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