This snippet is from Jack's Christmas Wish. Lissa has just been in an accident caused by her ex-boyfriend who has been stalking her. Derek is trying to get to Lissa and his son who is also in the car. Rex the ex is also trying to get to her.
“I said get the fuck away from my woman.” The jerk yelled again. Derek was ready to deck the sonofabitch. The sounds of distant sirens were getting louder by the second, bringing back even more memories. He’d already lost one woman he loved, he wasn’t prepared to lose another one. And yes, he realized he did love her in that very moment
LOVE when the moment of love is finally noticed- GREAT job Bonni
ReplyDeleteDawne P
Very intense, powerful moment! Very well done!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Job!
SammyJo
I think the moment love is realized is always so special. Great Six!
ReplyDeletePowerful six, love it!
ReplyDeleteNice six!
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Bonni! Tense, yet tender as he admits his feelings for her. Wonderful scine.
ReplyDeleteIgnore the cops Derek!! Beat the crap out of that sonofabitch!!!
ReplyDeleteGREAT SIX!!
Intense and great six. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThere's the Bonni I know and love! Exquisite SSS. So powerful and intense!
ReplyDeleteLoved it - very powerful!
ReplyDeletewow! very intense..well done
ReplyDeleteLiz
Nice action scene! Great six!
ReplyDeleteGood job Bonni! I agree wholeheartedly with the consensus. I love it when the man wakes up and smells the java. Can he deck the sonofabitch? Please? For me? Can I do it?
ReplyDeleteAlways love that moment of realization.
ReplyDeleteAww, so sweet, yet, intense! Great six! Well written!
ReplyDeleteLove it! Now kick the SOB's ass! :)
ReplyDeletePowerful six!
ReplyDeleteWOOHOO...love that he recognized his feelings...nice and straight forward! Great Six!
ReplyDeleteLots of emotion!! Hope he decks that jerk!!!
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