Sunday, September 25, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #11


Welcome to another SSS. This snippet is From Jack's Christmas Wish. Derek has just made love to Lissa who is now sleeping. Derek is in the kitchen thinking about the course of the day and decides to move forward.

It angered him she hadn’t come to him about Rex. The bastard had a damn gun and intended to use it on her. There was no doubt in his mind he would have raped her. She said he had been leaving her messages detailing what he wanted to do to her sexually. Those alone made him want to kill the sonofabitch. He couldn’t let her go now; she needed his protection, his love, his last name.

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Posted by Bonni S. at 6:00 AM

24 comments:

  1. Gemma ParkesSeptember 25, 2011 at 6:56 AM

    Oh, l like him! Great six!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    Wow, lyrically expressive. Great Six!

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  3. An Open BookSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    Awww, what a guy- I want to order one like him for my very own- great 6

    Dawne P

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  4. Karenna ColcroftSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    Great six. I like this character already!

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  5. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    Boy, is someone pissed off! Great "show" of anger mixed with his tenderness for her at the end.

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  6. Author Cyril J. MichaelSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Great six! I love when men go all Alpha ;-)

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  7. VenusBookluvrSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    Love the last three words! Great 6 full of raw emotion.

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  8. Pablo MichaelsSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Great six. I love Derek's character. More men should be like him.

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  9. Cara BristolSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    Love a protective man. Nice.

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  10. JoAnne KenrickSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    love your voice... and the characterization is fantastic. Nice six xxx

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  11. Marie DeesSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Wow, strong six!

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  12. Christine WarnerSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    I'm intrigued...I don't even know what he looks like, but I can imagine he's hot as hell :) Love this line...
    He couldn’t let her go now; she needed his protection, his love, his last name

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  13. Kellie KamrynSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    Love a protective man! great 6 :)

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  14. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    Awww...Really love that last line.

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  15. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    ooooh. what did I miss? You can't leave this hanging. I need more!!

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  16. BreeSeptember 25, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    Protection from a stalker...one of my favorite premises. Great six!

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  17. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 1:41 PM

    I love a man who is willing to fight for his woman! Excellent six.

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  18. Katie HarperSeptember 25, 2011 at 3:34 PM

    Aaaawww....I need a man like that. Great six lady!!

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  19. AlixSeptember 25, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    Absolutely fantastic six, you are a true pleasure to read, beautifully executed. Sensational work.

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  20. S.LiraSeptember 25, 2011 at 4:27 PM

    Wow, you can feel the tension there!

    Nice six

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  21. Vivien DeanSeptember 25, 2011 at 5:50 PM

    Something to be said about a protective man! Thanks for sharing. :)

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  22. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:02 PM

    Ho goody, a happy ending! Love it when Prince Charming mans up. Love your work Bonnie. Good six!

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  23. Taryn KincaidSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:09 PM

    Great pacing, great masculine voice. Great last sentence, especially.

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  24. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2011 at 11:02 AM

    This was wonderful, Bonni. I really like that last sentence. xo

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