Sunday, September 25, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #11


Welcome to another SSS. This snippet is From Jack's Christmas Wish. Derek has just made love to Lissa who is now sleeping. Derek is in the kitchen thinking about the course of the day and decides to move forward.

It angered him she hadn’t come to him about Rex. The bastard had a damn gun and intended to use it on her. There was no doubt in his mind he would have raped her. She said he had been leaving her messages detailing what he wanted to do to her sexually. Those alone made him want to kill the sonofabitch. He couldn’t let her go now; she needed his protection, his love, his last name.

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24 comments:

  1. Wow, lyrically expressive. Great Six!

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  2. Awww, what a guy- I want to order one like him for my very own- great 6

    Dawne P

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  3. Great six. I like this character already!

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  4. Boy, is someone pissed off! Great "show" of anger mixed with his tenderness for her at the end.

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  5. Great six! I love when men go all Alpha ;-)

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  6. Love the last three words! Great 6 full of raw emotion.

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  7. Great six. I love Derek's character. More men should be like him.

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  8. love your voice... and the characterization is fantastic. Nice six xxx

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  9. I'm intrigued...I don't even know what he looks like, but I can imagine he's hot as hell :) Love this line...
    He couldn’t let her go now; she needed his protection, his love, his last name

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  10. ooooh. what did I miss? You can't leave this hanging. I need more!!

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  11. Protection from a stalker...one of my favorite premises. Great six!

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  12. I love a man who is willing to fight for his woman! Excellent six.

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  13. Aaaawww....I need a man like that. Great six lady!!

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  14. Absolutely fantastic six, you are a true pleasure to read, beautifully executed. Sensational work.

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  15. Wow, you can feel the tension there!

    Nice six

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  16. Something to be said about a protective man! Thanks for sharing. :)

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  17. Ho goody, a happy ending! Love it when Prince Charming mans up. Love your work Bonnie. Good six!

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  18. Great pacing, great masculine voice. Great last sentence, especially.

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  19. This was wonderful, Bonni. I really like that last sentence. xo

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