Friday, September 16, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #6


Welcome to yet another Flash Fiction Friday where we take one photo as a group and make a story using 100 words no more no less. Joining me are som very talented writers and you can check out their version of Flash Fiction Friday by clicking this link. Enjoy!
“Take anything you want, just don’t hurt us? What the hell were you thinking?” She squeezes his fingers tight in her hand.
“I was thinking, I wanted to get out of the carjacking alive. I’m sorry if I did something wrong as usual.”
“I’m sorry. I’m just freaked out and pissed off they took my Manolo Blahniks.”
“Yeah, well they took my Ferrari and you have a hundred pairs of shoes at home.”
“Shit! Someone’s coming. Get in that ditch over there and act like you’re making love to me.
“Not a problem. I act like that all the time.”

13 comments:

  1. Sounds like they need to go to couples therapy. Great post, Bonni! xo

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  2. Sounds like ninety percent of the couples i know. I'd be mad about the Ferrari too!

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  3. Love the interplay between the couple!

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  4. Bwahahahahah - snort - snigger!

    Loved it :)

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  5. *rolls eyes* How'd you get a magnifying glass on my marriage Bonni? Hmmm?

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  6. Bonni, Bonni, Bonni; I just love the dialogue between your characters, it is so real-world, life-like. When he said: "I'm sorry if I did something wrong as FUCKING usual." - I had an instant flash-back moment. Excuse my embellishment. Terrific-Terrific

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  7. LOL. Love the interplay and comedy between the characters. Cool work.

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  8. OH NO!! OH HELL NO!! YOU DO NOT SCREW WITH A GIRL'S MANOLOS!!! It sucks that the Ferrari got jacked, but the real crime here is the missing Manolo Blahniks. Travesty. Great job!!

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  9. Very cute and oh, so funny, Bonni. I loved the last line:) xo

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  10. i can totallly identify with this sometimes. Nice work!

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