Friday, December 2, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #16


Welcome to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. A picture might be worth a thousand words, but today it’s worth 100 no more, no less. Thanks for stopping by and please follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday. Now here are my 100.



“What the fuck is she doing here?” Jeremy asked as he peered through the keyhole. He could hear them laughing. This was supposed to be a one on one deal.

“Dammit, what should I do?”  He thought of confronting them both. What good would it do though?  On one hand he held the truth and on the other a secret so private it would destroy lives if told.

He decided to go with a knock as room service.

Knock.

Mark walked toward the door and opened it.

“Jeremy, I’m so sorry, she followed me here. You know I love you.”

15 comments:

  1. oh oh!there's trouble in paradise!! hope they'll be able to sort everything out!!
    Great post!

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  2. LOL! She followed him so he decided to sleep with her? Guys will say anything to get of hot water. *giggle* Great read.

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  3. Oh my, total trouble in paradise. Loved how you handled this picture.

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  4. Poor Jeremy. Hope he kicks Mark in the balls.

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  5. Hah, he sure has some way of showing his love. *rolls eyes* Nice one! :)

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  6. eeeeek...if she followed you why is she in the room with you? hmmmmm...some explaining quickly is in order! Great FFF!

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  7. ummm I don't know If I buy that excuse either... Great post!

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  8. If that excuse is the best he can 'cum' up with, he is headed for Haiti!! It's hard to be fast on your feet when you are hard on your......Loved it, Miss Bonnie:) xo

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  9. someone needs to learn to lie better.

    I'm not sure who I feel bad for in your fff post. It seems they all have secrets ;)

    Great FFF Bonni

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  10. I'm not sure if I would have knocked after seeing that. Sounds like someone has some explaining to do.

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  11. Guess she was just too enticing to turn away. Nice post!

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  12. Sounds like a little lost puppy followed him home!

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