Friday, April 13, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #34


Welcome to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. A picture might be worth a thousand words, but today it’s worth 100 no more, no less. Thanks for stopping by and please follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday. Now here are my 100.

“Come on you guys, how long do I have to lie like this? Isn’t it, Charlie’s turn anyway?”
“Hey, just because you’ve lost everything but your shoes, doesn’t mean you get out of playing. Charlie, spin the bottle.”
“You could always come over here and sit with me,” Charlie said as the bottle spun.
“No thanks. I’m just fine over here.” She would definitely regret those extra shots she’d taken. She so didn’t see stripping in front of her two best friends tonight. The floor was cold under her, making her nipples bead.
The bottle stopped. “Lose the shoes, babe.”

14 comments:

  1. Lose the shoes, then let Charlie suck on her toes. Nice Flash, Bonni.

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  2. Oh Bonni, you weren't kidding when you said you were including humour. But I want to know what the next stage of the game is.

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  3. Love this! So what happens next, hmm? Both of them ravish her body, right?

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  4. Poor girl. Those are some great shoes and I can only imagine the dress that went with them. GREAT JOB!!

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  5. lucky roommates
    fun flash!! "Lose the shoes, babe"
    love it

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  6. Ha! i think these guys are fixing that bottle! Unless they're naked too! Great post!

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  7. This was so well written and my fav line was "making her nipples bead". So descriptive. Loved it!:) xo

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  8. Bonni, you've left me wanting more, more more!
    Always a pleasure reading your posts! Fantastic FFF.

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  9. LOL. Way good. I think everyone had a good time with this pic. We all got something different. Suspense, passion, humor. That's why I love FFF.

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  10. The possibilities are endless here! Fabulous Flasher Bonni but bad girl for leaving me hanging.

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  11. Why do i have this feeling that by the end of the night that distance she is trying to keep is gonna be much smaller...lol. This was a fun one. loved it!

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  12. I like that line, lose the shoes.

    Great flasher!

    SLira

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  13. Loved it and I think she will be getting plenty warmed up soon. ;)

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