Welcome to Tanatlizing Tuesday, where we pick our own picture to write 200 words about. I hope you enjoy my 200 and be sure to check out all of the other teasers by following the links below.
He mesmerized her, making something inside her burn with passion. She often watched surfers, fascinated by their legs and how they moved, but this one made her ache inside for just one kiss.
She watched him glance down, noticing her scales. “Fuck me! You’re a…a…mermaid!” He pulled back away from her and for a moment tried to flee. She pulled him back flush with her body.
“Yes. I am. I won’t hurt you.” He relaxed against her, then hopped on his surfboard, pulling her with him.
“You’re so damn beautiful.” The water calmed and he leaned in and kissed her. A sweet caress of her lips. His eyes fluttered closed as he savored the moment.
She deepened the kiss exploring his mouth, tasting his unique flavor as it burst on her tongue.
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Leann Mitchell: http://
Ray Sostre: http://
Lee Brazil: http://
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Dianne Hartsock: http://
Cyril J. Michael: http://
Cassandre Dayne: http://
Gemma Parkes: http://
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Holy, good God...."as it burst on her tongue."????? I have goose flesh all over me. I want her to kiss me like that: deeply, exploring, tasting..savouring the ignition. As usual, Bonni. Spot on. G~spot, that is:) xo
ReplyDeleteYes, l love that line too! Cute picture and an even cuter story Bonni!
ReplyDeleteFun story! Wonder how far her exploring will go. ;)
ReplyDeleteI'd be interested to see this expanded. It felt a bit rushed in the teaser, like I wasn't getting all the alien differences that surprise each of them in this first encounter.
ReplyDeleteLove it!!!!
ReplyDeleteLike Muffy and Gemma, I love that line too. Awesome teaser!
ReplyDeletePlease write more. I love it. I love mermaids, and this one has a lot more to her it seems
ReplyDeleteOh Bonni this is absolutely fabulous. I love your style. Love the photo. Love mermaids and love your post. Have I said I love it!!
ReplyDeleteSo romantic...made me sigh. Hope they do work something(s) out between them...:)
ReplyDeleteFantastic as always!!!
ReplyDeleteWow, very sensual and erotic. She just tasted the phermones of his kiss. I love it!
ReplyDeleteWhat a unique and awesome teaser Bonni! Very well written.
ReplyDeleteI have always been fascinated by the allure of mermaids in fantasy. It seems a lot of men want to be rescued by a beautiful woman with fins. Bonni, you have given the mermaid myth a nice boost and I can also taste her lips myself. Muwah!@
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