Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser #8


Welcome to Tanatlizing Tuesday, where we pick our own picture to write 200 words about. I hope you enjoy my 200 and be sure to check out all of the other teasers by following the links below.


Ariel watched him for hours. He caught wave after wave riding his surfboard, but when he got wiped out, she knew she had to save him. She swam as fast as she could, getting to him. he was churning in the wave being dragged under over and over again. She grabbed him and pulled him to the surface. “You’re safe with me. I won’t let anything hurt you.”
 He mesmerized her, making something inside her burn with passion. She often watched surfers, fascinated by their legs and how they moved, but this one made her ache inside for just one kiss.
She watched him glance down, noticing her scales. “Fuck me! You’re a…a…mermaid!” He pulled back away from her and for a moment tried to flee. She pulled him back flush with her body.
“Yes. I am. I won’t hurt you.” He relaxed against her, then hopped on his surfboard, pulling her with him.
“You’re so damn beautiful.” The water calmed and he leaned in and kissed her. A sweet caress of her lips. His eyes fluttered closed as he savored the moment.

13 comments:

  1. Holy, good God...."as it burst on her tongue."????? I have goose flesh all over me. I want her to kiss me like that: deeply, exploring, tasting..savouring the ignition. As usual, Bonni. Spot on. G~spot, that is:) xo

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  2. Yes, l love that line too! Cute picture and an even cuter story Bonni!

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  3. Fun story! Wonder how far her exploring will go. ;)

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  4. I'd be interested to see this expanded. It felt a bit rushed in the teaser, like I wasn't getting all the alien differences that surprise each of them in this first encounter.

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  5. Like Muffy and Gemma, I love that line too. Awesome teaser!

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  6. Please write more. I love it. I love mermaids, and this one has a lot more to her it seems

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  7. Oh Bonni this is absolutely fabulous. I love your style. Love the photo. Love mermaids and love your post. Have I said I love it!!

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  8. So romantic...made me sigh. Hope they do work something(s) out between them...:)

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  9. Wow, very sensual and erotic. She just tasted the phermones of his kiss. I love it!

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  10. What a unique and awesome teaser Bonni! Very well written.

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  11. I have always been fascinated by the allure of mermaids in fantasy. It seems a lot of men want to be rescued by a beautiful woman with fins. Bonni, you have given the mermaid myth a nice boost and I can also taste her lips myself. Muwah!@

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