Friday, September 30, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #8


Welcome to another Flash Fiction Friday, where we take a single picture and write 100 words, no more and no less to create a story.  Joining me this week are some super talented writers. To check out their enterpretation of this weeks picture click this link. Flassher Fiction Friday As always, thanks for stopping by. Here are my 100.


 
                    It was supposed to be simple. Nicole was supposed to go undercover as his girlfriend. Jason wasn’t supposed to find out.

“What are you going to do to me?”

‘I’m going to get the answers I’m looking for, one way or another.”

“I told you, I don’t know anything.

“You knew enough to fuck me for the code to the safe. Now it’s my turn to fuck you.”

“Please, I’ll do whatever you say.”

“I know. Now pull my underwear down and suck me.”

“You’re not going to kill me?” She pulled his underwear down.

“No. Now suck me Nicole.”

7 comments:

  1. Poor Nicole got caught. The secret agents life is hard.

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  2. This was wonderful! I loved it! To be in her shoes, sigh. *grin*

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  3. I never get in trouble like that. I always get caught speeding or something equally lame. I want to be punished like Nicole.

    LOVED IT BONNI!

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  4. Very hot! And unique! I loved it :)

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  5. I am going to be honest and risk you hating me. It was a great concept but to me the flow felt forced and unnatural. I absolutely love your work so please don't take offense.

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