Friday, November 4, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #12


Welcome to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. A picture might be worth a thousand words, but today it’s worth 100 no more, no less. Thanks for stopping by and please follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday Now here are my 100.
David had it. He had the proof he needed on this little piece of film. There she was with that bastard Jeff, straddling him, riding him just like she used to do with him. Somehow he would make Mellissa pay. He didn’t even know when things had gone so wrong. They seemed happy and all the sudden she grew cold, distant and eventually they didn’t even touch.


She always had an excuse. “I’m tired,” she said every other night. He missed licking her sweet juices from her pussy; he missed her riding him like she was in this damn photo.

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18 comments:

  1. Tut, tut, tut - naughty Mellissa :)

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  2. Oh my, Mellissa has been bad. Hopefully, for his sake payback will be a bitch.

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  3. Things don't sound like they are going to go well for Mellissa if he has his way about it.

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  4. Pffft he can find better than Melissa. Plenty of Pussy around :P

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  5. Ah, the tragedy of cheating!! Bad Mellissa!! she deserves some spanking!! great post :)

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  6. Bad girl, Melissa. If your man was doing that why go to some guy named Jeff? Great job!

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  7. Oh shite - Melissa better start packing! The funniest thing is the order I'm reading the flashes today was: sweet, sweet, sweet, then BAM! It was perfect! :D

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  8. Oh Bonni, it is truly amazing to me how we all see these pictures so differently. I didn't see the cowgirl in this photo until I read your FFF and then I could see it just as plain as day. Wow, this is so cool. I can clearly picture her in my mind bouncing up and down a man's joy stick. Loved it - now I've got to go find me a cowgirl.

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  9. Great post! Melissa better pack those saddle bags...

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  10. Great interpretation! Love your imagination. Fantastic FFF.

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  11. Poor David. Maybe I can try to cheer him up ;-)

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  12. Very good FFF. It's very hard when the intimacy fails in a relationship. Nice post.

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  13. Oh that wench! What's he going to do?

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  14. Ooh, bad bad Mellisa. Not for nothing, but David still seems so caught up in the sex, even with the evidence, she might be able to dupe him or at least use seduction to get back into his good graces again. He sounds whipped. Just a thought. ;)

    ~Luna

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  15. Melissa needs a good spanking and he needs a new woman. Great post Bonni. Patti Logan

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  16. Hell hath no fury...Love the revenge angle!!

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  17. Since David still seems so into Melissa maybe Melissa can have both men to ride...Go cowgirl...Great story line...:D

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