Monday, May 14, 2012

Tantalyzing Tuesday Teaser #5


Welcome to Tanatlizing Tuesday, where we pick our own picture to write 200 words about. I hope you enjoy my 200 and be sure to check out all of the other teasers by following the links below.

“Come to me, my love. This will be our first moon together.”  Alixa held on the railing as she basked in the moon’s glow. Axel, the alpha male, would be here soon. Her lover, her mate, her life.
She glanced below searching the city lights for any sign of him. A car came into view. All she needed was a glimpse of the man she loved. Waiting, she took a deep breath and held it until the car was in sight. No, it wasn’t him. He had to be close; she could feel him to her very bones. The connection was strong, and could only be broken by death.
A whisper in the wind sent chills down her spine. “I’m coming for you, my love.” It was his voice; she could taste him on her tongue. Licking her lips, she answered, “Come for me. Please come for me.”
“Darlin’, you don’t have to ask me twice.” Axel walked up behind her, startling her.
“OMG!!! How long have you been standing there?” Her hand fluttered over her chest.
“Long enough for you to tell me exactly what I want to hear. Strip and I’ll come for you all night, sweetheart.

16 comments:

  1. Lovely, Bonni, just lovely. ......."taste him on her lips"...... Yummy:) xo

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  2. Very sexy and alluring Bonni. Loved it.

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  3. That was a great last line! Sure of himself, hmm? A beautiful picture and provocative scene, Bonni. :)

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  4. Delicious short. Really loved it

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  5. Nice picture- loved the emotion and the gotcha ending!

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  6. Ooooh! Very neat. You never expect wolves in that kind of a picture. Great teaser.

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  7. Love the way he appears behind her answering her call. Lovely post!

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  8. Beautiful pic and tantalizing piece, Bonni!

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  9. OMG- I am so breathing hard with that last statement!!!

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  10. Bonnie, purely shocking and tasting! I like the element of surprise and this scene was purely vivid! Great work!

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  11. Bonni, that is so fantastic! I just want more, you totally teased me.

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  12. First of all, she's sitting on the edge of a building wearing some kick-ass, CFM - 5" heels. Damn, those are hot. Now, I want to know - are they going to do it up there or are they going inside?

    Excellent Ms. Bonni, so - it seems that you're venturing into the paranormal. I like it.

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  13. Oh, what a crime to end there. What happens next? An excellent interpretation of the picture. Chilling, provocative, expectant. Wonderful teaser.

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  14. Beautiful job Bonni...I love everything about it. I am a paranormal junky and if you wrote this whole story out, I would buy it in a heartbeat. Your muse is just waiting right there and you both rock still. :)

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  15. Wow! Bonni that was an awesome teaser.

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  16. Loved it Bonni -- I'm glad you're venturing into the world of paranormal :)

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