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On that fateful summer night, in the grey-black mist, Xyla summoned death to make her minions. She could collect souls, but not own them until death. The moon ripe and high in the midnight sky loomed over them as they basked in her luminescence.
Only once every thousand years is Xyla able to come up from hell and collect a new batch of souls to do her bidding on the population. Every broken spirit, every dark and twisted mind is hers to control. Hers to unleash on the unsuspecting world. A sex fiend is allowed his depraved orgy; the murderer is allowed to feast on the innocent. For this one night the world is hers to control. The unlucky are taken without a thought, without remorse. In the slightest motion of her hands life is whisked away, to be replaced with the nothingness that is death.
“I wish to take this one.” Xyla pointed to the muscled man walking along the beach. He was the unlucky, but she wanted him for his body not his soul. He would lie with her creating a new breed of demon. The Government Officials.
“As you wish.” Death swooped in and collected him swiftly.
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Venus Cahill: http://
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Angelia Dawson: http://
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Oh, Bonni, you are such a twisted treat! "The Government Officials". Waxing political in an election year, are we? This was scary brilliant with dark undertones of scortching sex. Loved it!:) xo
ReplyDeleteThat last line was great! Wonderfully descriptive prose. Would love to see this story expanded. :)
ReplyDeleteWow, that was amazing! I could read this story and wonder where it goes from there. Nice work Bonnie.
ReplyDeletelmao - Bonnie 2pts...Government Officials 0...this gave me goosebumps and heebie jeebies while making me want to read on and wish for more...well done Bonnie! :D
ReplyDeleteGreat post...but there's enough government officials in the world. Let's hope the muscle bound hero has condoms.
ReplyDeleteLOL! You get me with all of the dark and beautiful imagery, and then you pull government officials out of the hat! Great job, Bonni.
ReplyDeleteGreat teaser. It sent shivers down me. I'd love to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteDamn! Multiple scores for you on this one Bonni.
ReplyDelete1) Even immortals are not immune to desire.
2) I like that reference to Government Officials as Demons. LOL
Way to go :)
Clever, tongue in cheek post Bonni. Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteI love good fantasy. The magic of this piece swept me away.
ReplyDeleteGovernment Officials -- your writing always impresses me and makes me giggle! Always a treat.
ReplyDeleteBonni -- I love your style. Very vivid and fluid, and funny to boot. Excellent Flash, and I would love to see this expanded :)
ReplyDeleteI'd like to see you expand this one I think there is a great story here!
ReplyDeleteThat was dark and beautiful. I was completely spell bound!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved the darkness of this piece
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