Friday, November 18, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #14


Welcome to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. A picture might be worth a thousand words, but today it’s worth 100 no more, no less. Thanks for stopping by and please follow the link to get to the other FFF posts. Flasher Fiction Friday Now here are my 100.

“Juliette, Juliette, where for art thou Juliette?” James kissed Eric’s hand, risking a smack to the face.
“Shut up, smartass before I knock your teeth in. You know I hate it when you do that. Now get in here and make love to me.” Eric pulled him up the rest of the way.  
“Alright, alright, hold your horses.” James took Eric in his arms on the balcony and kissed him, such an intimate embrace. He never cared much about what other people thought, so why not kiss his lover there for the world to see. He would never be ashmed.

15 comments:

  1. Love it. Glad that they kissed in public.

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  2. Awesome twist! I loved it, Bonni! xo

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  3. Yep, kissing on the balcony will certainly give the nosey neighbors something to talk about. Does that fall under the category of PDA? I always get confused. Bonni,excellent post.

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  4. it used to feel awkward to me to say, "make love" instead of saying "sex", but, the older i become, the more intimate and pleasant it sounds. nice FFF

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  5. love that they have a sense of humor! :D Great FFF!!!

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  6. Very Sexy! I loved the little twist. He didn't want any romance. he wanted to get right down to business. Loved it!

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  7. Great post! Especially the language, make love is so much more evocative than "have sex"

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  8. very nice post!! and they sould never be ashamed to show some love!

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  9. Love how we can view the same picture see similar scenarios and approach them so differently!

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  10. You show him and the rest of the world James! *sigh* :)

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