Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Tantalyzing Tuesday Teaser #4


Welcome to Tanatlizing Tuesday, where we pick our own picture to write 200 words about. I hope you enjoy my 200 and be sure to check out all of the other teasers by following the links below. 

Basil couldn’t deny her any longer. She was going to turn him, so they would be together forever. “Kira, my love, turn me tonight and stay with me.”
“You and your kingdom will be mine tonight. On the night of the dragon.” She rubbed his chest and pulled his head back, revealing his jugular.  “You know I want you really bad. I can almost taste you on my tongue.” She leaned in and dropped her fangs, then sank them into his cream colored skin.
“Ah…yes, Kira, everything I am and everything I have will be yours tonight.” He felt the life fading from him, but was not afraid. Soon he and his love would be together. He imagined taking her for the first time. His cock stirred even though he was almost drained. He was fading in and out with images of his body on top of hers; He would part her slick labia and sink in balls deep. He could picture her face, eyes closed, mouth open with a tiny bit of fang showing.
She paused when his heart was about to stop and whispered in his ear, “I Hope this works out, cause I’ve never done it before.”

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17 comments:

  1. Oh, that was great! And what a wonderful cute ending. Fabulous!

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  2. Oh I was sucked in there! What a wonderful teaser, and a great ending. Well done

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  3. Oh gosh, that ending was perfect! I'm still laughing. What a horrible thing to tell him just then. Loved this. :)

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  4. No! Poor man! Funny post Bonni and lovely story telling!

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  5. Wow! Talk about a twist! I loved that ending!

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  6. Yeah, let's hope it does work. While its encouraging that she hasn't done it before, I'd hate to be her guinea pig.

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  7. OMG You are so bad Bonni. LOL That was one major twist at the end and I loved it. Poor guy, but he probably thought Love was worth the risque...don't we all?

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  8. Bonni!! You beast!! Never?! REALLY??!! Great exciting build up with a chuckle of a twist, leaving me pretty excited....but snickering? Loved it, as usual. You never fail to entertain:) xo

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  9. I had to chuckle on this one, oh yes I did. Gave me a huge grin. Loved it. Too much fun

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  10. Now that's a serious mood killer, in more ways than one. I bet his cock went limp as a noodle. Oh well, there is no do-over. Nicely done Ms. Bonni

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  11. Hey Bonni Babe, that was freaking awesome. I was all with it, and trying to figure out what was going to happen and then blam.. I laughed and cringed at the same time. Poor man, I hope it works out for them!

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  12. Oh that's not right! lol This was excellent...I was in the moment, and if I had anything to go limp it would have with that last bit. Loved this Bonnie, great job. :)

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  13. I love a woman who can sink her teeth into something...preferably a man! lol

    Great job, Bonni!

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  14. Freaking fantastic! Love your style.

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  15. Fantastic Teaser!! That was a little piece of magic.

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