Sunday, August 14, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #5


This is Laine and Melanie discussing a little blowout. This is from Eternal Bliss a work in progress. Enjoy!


“Kyle and I had,” she lowered her voice to a whisper and looked around, “we had sex five times and he ran out of condoms, so, we had to use one of my shower gag gift condoms and it broke.”

“Damn.” Was Mel’s opinion on the matter.
Laine sat back and took another bite of her breadstick, waiting patiently to order the largest chocolate dessert they had.
“Well, are you going to see him again?”
“Yes, he was the best I’ve ever had, well, right up until that lollipop glow-in-the-dark condom broke.”

19 comments:

  1. Fantastic six, I loved their dialogue and five times, I'd want to see him again too!!

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  2. Uh-oh...that doesn't sound good- great 6 Bonni
    Dawne P

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  3. Ohhh! Sounds like someone is gonna be expecting the unexpectd! Great six!

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  4. Great dialogue which moves the story on well. I laughed when the lollipop condom broke.

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  5. Nice dialogue. Sucks that the condom broke. Awesome Six!

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  6. Ah the plot thickens..too bad the condom wasn't as thick or can it be that helps the plot too.Will be back to find out.

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  7. Great dialogue, keeps us wanting to know what happens now that the condom broke.
    Great six.

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  8. Bonni, tell Laine that she can buy condoms buy the gross at Sam's Club. She should keep a supply on hand for emergencies. If she's found a man who is sexing her 5-6 times a night, she needs to be a girl scout and always be prepared. Great SS. So, where can I buy me some of those glow in the dark condoms?

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  9. Oh, that was a fun six! And for those writers wanting to work a secret baby into a plot in this age of safe sex, I had lunch with a college student this summer who told me about sweating it out when she and her boyfriend had a REGULAR condom failure. So, shit happens!

    I just put two horny 19-year-olds on a beach for mine, though. He does mention he doesn't have any protection, but they do it anyway. Who'd have thought? So far, no one has complained that all they were worrying about was an unwanted pregnancy. lol

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  10. I hate when that happens! Damn lollipop gag gift condoms! LOL Great six.

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  11. When in doubt, double bag it. Loved! Love this whole story! ;)

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  12. I'm going to assume this was their first night together, because otherwise, she would've known in advance that he had more staying power than she had condoms, lol. Well done!

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  13. Love your description of the condom! A malfunction would definitely take the fun out of things. Good six.

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  14. *snicker*
    Priceless closing line. LOL
    and um....can I have a guy that'll go 5 times in a night? Please? lol

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  15. Interesting Six! Leaves things open for
    a lot of possibilites!

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