Sunday, August 28, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #7

This is a snippet of a love scene from Eternal Bliss between Kyle and Laine. A current work in progress. Enjoy!

“Can’t stop, damn, I can’t get enough.” He squeezed her ass tighter; spreading her cheeks in is palms. He slid a long finger between them using the slick moisture from her arousal to lube her puckered star and then pushed in.

She gasped at the new sensation; it burned and felt good all at the same time, throwing her over into oblivion. Her orgasm crashed over her fast and wild. She bucked and writhed against him, her pussy gripped him as her sensitive flesh rippled around his shaft.

16 comments:

  1. rippling around his shaft. *fanning frantically.* Great six!

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  2. What are you people trying to do to me this week? Amazingly steamy six - hot, hot, hot!!!

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  3. uhm...yeah, what Lisa said.

    Great Six!

    Laura

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  4. HAPPY Sunday morning- what a Six--- whew
    Dawne P

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  5. Zing! My first of the day. :) Well done!

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  6. I want a Kyle of my very own!

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  7. Remind me to read you stuff sitting in a freezer. Great six!!

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  8. Her "puckered star"? and her "sensitive flesh rippled"? Geez, I am rippling and puckering right here and now as we speak!! Very tactile and descriptive six. Whew, where's the iced tea?:) xo

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  9. What great choice of words! From puckerd star to oblivion. Excuse me while I adjust my hard-on. You wrote a HOT F'n Six! And you got a new follower!

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  10. Very hot and steamy, Bonni! I agree with all of the others today. Great job! Loved it! xo

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  11. Puckered star - glow in the dark condoms; Ms. Bonni, you do indeed have a 'fertile' imagination. Nice Six

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