Sunday, August 21, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #6

This is a continuation from last week from Eternal Bliss a work in progress. Laine and Melanie are having lunch and Melanie is pushing Laine to follow through with Kyle.

Laine covered the mouth piece whispering to Mel, “It’s just ringing.”

Melanie rolled her eyes. “Okay, well, when it goes to voicemail leave a message telling him you're on fire and you need him to put you out. 

Laine almost closed the phone, unsure what to say. Why couldn’t he just answer the phone? Of course, she still had no idea what to say to him. Hi, I’m Laine, the woman you might have knocked up with a glow-in-the-dark condom.

16 comments:

  1. I admit it made me chuckle! Loved it

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  2. Made me smile. thanks for the six.

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  3. Delightfully colorful with the glow-in-the-dark condoms. Says allot in 6!! Well, done:) xo

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  4. LOL, Oh that was really good! Lovely Six!

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  5. He he - that would sure get his attention! You got mine!

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  6. LOL! Damn glow in the dark condom will get you every time.

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  7. guess the glow didn't stop the flow....

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  8. Ah, the glow of love. Those glow-in-the-dark condoms are so cool. The only problem I've had, is they eliminate my excuse for not being able see that I was coming in the back-door. Bonni, I love how you keep it hot.

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  9. The humor is well-balanced against the potential seriousness. Thanks for sharing!

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  10. I agree with Vivien; great balance of humor and seriousness!

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  11. LOL I was laughing at the fire reference, by the time I got to glow-in-the-dark condom I was sold. Awesome six! Let me know when this work in progress becomes available! -wants-

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  12. The last line of your six would blow any man's mind. Good job.

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